I showed you the other day a page from the updated issue #12 that I’d updating twice. Well, I’ve gone back and made even MORE changes to it!

You see, I felt that the sergeant (the main guy here) had lost his distinct voice but the issue was that in making him sound like he should it meant he was using words that younger readers might not get! The solution? Have the other officer – who is very much the comedy character of the two of them – explain the word!

Explaining

You know, I might be using this trick a lot more… And hey, do you think I can promote this book as being educational now?

Anyways, this is absolutely the last time I’m going to update this page! Honest!

More soon! Bear hugs!